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My plans for this weekend are going down to Eugene. Me and my family are planning on going to spend some time with our family and friends. Usually when we go, we go out to eat and after that we go bowling! We all have a lot of fun.

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1.I went Skating down at the pond and three kids from my school were there. We fell down again and again and we laughed so much our stomachs hurt.

2.I though the lopsided game would never end.The score just kept getting worse and worse.

3.Martha thinks that she is so cool, but she is not cool to me.

4.Joe watched a video his mom had bought for him at the store where she worked.

5.Susan loved to watch football and she would watch it every Sunday on T.V. Every Saturday she would go to the local college football game and she would always wear school colors.